Finding the Empress

Highbirth City

A vast city state, once ruled by the benevolent half-elf empress, Drizaea. Little is known of the place by outsiders, the city guard rarely lets anyone in, and if they enter the price to leave is high.

From a distance, one can see massive spires just inside the city walls. Four in number, one for each direction on the compass. The center holds the vast palace.

Highbirth wasn't always a city-state. It had once beheld half the continent of Bloodkin, some 5000 miles in diameter, if one were to draw a circle around it. Since these days much within have changed.

Nice I think this has a lot of potential. I could really work with something like this. Now time for bashing.... Hahah

lol. Any critiques?

I'm all for saving the Empress. It's an Empress! SHE BETTER BE GOOD LOOKING FEL!!!! j/j

She might be... You'll find that out in the end. Promise.

A little bare if you ask me but otherwise it sound OK

NinjaWolf wrote:A little bare if you ask me but otherwise it sound OK

Well. That's why I'm having people critique it. Anything you'd like to add to it?

Is this city a metropolis or something? Never done an Urban RP so I'm quite curious about that.

Yes, it is indeed a metropolis. Although I don't think we'll be spending much actual RP time inside the city...

Well, I'm interested in it. :]

Hopefully you'll have more to add. Otherwise, it's fine by me. -Not so picky.- Rescuing an empress is an important task after all. -Nod.-

Indeed. There will be more, just won't give it all away! *Sneaky*